WRITING LESSON #part10

Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in safe way.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is certainly clear that international sporting events can unite the nation entire the world. Despite, there are some critical tensions such as political problem or war happened between some countries. Personally, I extremely agree building the international reconciliation through the sport matches.

In actual fact, it is a common that should be some political problems happened between two or more states because many rigid of international rules which are not always suitable with the each country’s condition.  To reduce this critical tension actually there are many effective ways, for example inviting some country’s delegation to create some more peaceable activities. Nevertheless, the precious events, that have been worked over a hundred of years, is international sport occasions such international Olympiad, football world cup and more.

It is undeniable that all of the elements in the sport events, not only the rules but also the athlete itself, usually totally respect with the fairness. Therefore, because of this reason, I have been convinced to argue that sporting occasions is the best measure to release the patriotic emotions in safe way. As we know, during these worthy events people will got many new friends from other countries and absolutely they will forget all of problem where actually they have been being faced. For example, even Indonesia and Malaysia often got misunderstanding related with some bilateral problems, yet when their own athletes match in the same field, they should unite in the same place and ease their national tension. Obviously, the reconciliation between both of these countries might be released indirect.

In conclusion, international sport events are the best way to create the reconciliation between two or more problematic states.  

WRITING LESSON #part9

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

It is obviously clear that one of the serious problems happened between people today is the declining of health level. Most of nations extremely believe that government should take a part to resolve this critical problem such as improve the health facilities, however, personally I certainly agree with this. Despite, some people tend to against this idea, because it is going to give a few effects for other society services.

On the one hand, in actual fact, people today vulnerable waste their free time just collapse on their own home surrounded by many lack of nutrition foods. Moreover, this unhealthy habit currently has been much more common activity between teenagers and elderly people. Some of them argue that they do not have much leisure time to do some exercises because of their rigid time table and because they do not have some fitness equipments. Based on this case, government should create the greatest idea increasing the health life style among the modern persons. For example, installing the public sport equipment in the garden, it might be giving more easiness way for people to do exercise with their own family, more it can improve the rate of health level condition. 

On the other hand, if government builds some more public sport infrastructures, it might increase the national expenditures particular for health services. This situation will be affected to other cases such as rising of the price of the general society’s tax, because they should pay more to support that government’s program. Besides, some people think that it is not best idea to tackle the unhealthy problem because interest to sport is not universal so some people might be distracted through these public facilities, moreover there are not all of sport equipments that can be used by all of range of age.

In conclusion, even building many public sport services gives some disadvantage, yet this is the compulsory for the government to increase the society’s health level.