WRITING LESSON #part9

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

It is obviously clear that one of the serious problems happened between people today is the declining of health level. Most of nations extremely believe that government should take a part to resolve this critical problem such as improve the health facilities, however, personally I certainly agree with this. Despite, some people tend to against this idea, because it is going to give a few effects for other society services.

On the one hand, in actual fact, people today vulnerable waste their free time just collapse on their own home surrounded by many lack of nutrition foods. Moreover, this unhealthy habit currently has been much more common activity between teenagers and elderly people. Some of them argue that they do not have much leisure time to do some exercises because of their rigid time table and because they do not have some fitness equipments. Based on this case, government should create the greatest idea increasing the health life style among the modern persons. For example, installing the public sport equipment in the garden, it might be giving more easiness way for people to do exercise with their own family, more it can improve the rate of health level condition. 

On the other hand, if government builds some more public sport infrastructures, it might increase the national expenditures particular for health services. This situation will be affected to other cases such as rising of the price of the general society’s tax, because they should pay more to support that government’s program. Besides, some people think that it is not best idea to tackle the unhealthy problem because interest to sport is not universal so some people might be distracted through these public facilities, moreover there are not all of sport equipments that can be used by all of range of age.

In conclusion, even building many public sport services gives some disadvantage, yet this is the compulsory for the government to increase the society’s health level.