WRITING LESSON #part8

TELEWORKING

Teleworking, or the use of telecommunications to allow people to work from home, should be adopted by all employers in order to improve the quality of life of their staff. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clear that now days technology brings massive impacts up for every single part of our life. Some people today may be working in different ways like used to such as using teleworking method. Obviously, it is more flexible, cheaper, and easier. However, there may be offered many easiness ways, but personally I totally disagree with this idea and I will explain why.

The comfortably features that have been provided by high-tech give many worthy advantages particularly for personal business sector. Becoming a trend among our societies today to start up their business by online, usually it is called by online shops. Having a business by using teleworking method should be cheaper and easier, moreover they can do other activities such as travelling, cooking, doing household duties while running the business. Yet, this method should be only suitable for individual business which does not need many employers.

On the other hand, as we know, many people work as an employer in the one of factories. Indeed, working as a team should be practiced among the workers, because they will face many kind of technical problems that they should break it. Therefore, using telecommunication to allow them to work from home is not compatible for this kind of careers. Improving the quality of life of their staff not only by letting them to work closely with their family but also by improving their salaries, safety in the work place, it might be much more meaning for them and their family’s life.

In conclusion, improving the level of life of the employers not only let them to do their duties in home or using the worthy features of technology but also improving their safety and salary should be more precious for their life.

WRITING LESSON #part7

CAMBRIDGE 9/ TEST 2/ TASK 2

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children),

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A problem for teenagers today is being more selfish and careless person for the societies. There may be many ideas appeared recently to tackle this serious problem. Personally, I extremely agree requiring students to work out in the charity services should be the wise choice either for pupils or societies itself.

There might be a common role among today’s education world that student should study in school more than twelve hours in a day with many home-works. It is clear that pupils today are more tiring and busier than before, they do not have much free time play around with their close friends, because of almost of their precious time just for carrying out the assignments. Obviously, if we let this thoughtful habit exist for a long time, it might kill their social feeling and become a disaster for the community itself.

Forcing the unpaid community service that becomes a mandatory part of high school programs should be an effective solution to face this main problem. Through this honorable activities should improve either student s social character or neighborhood condition, because by involving their selves in this activity directly, they might be learned many kind of social knowledge that cannot be gained in the formal education. At the same time, they should be made the improvement for the society.

In conclusion, to decline the number of individualism people among the society should be broke from the teenagers, making them more social like doing the charity activities is the key to resolve this critical problem.

WRITING LESSON #part6

CAMBRIDGE 8 / TEST 3/ TASK 2

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

Climate crisis is the big problem through these days among populations in this world, some of that reasons are traffic jam and pollution effect. Many bad news about the environment itself figures out lately, consider this, many ideas related with revealing environment come up. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel will be worked to solve this. Personally, I completely disagree that it becomes the best problem solver. Herein, in the following essay, I will explain other effective measures.

First of all, transportation expenditures become the major reason where have made increasing the traffic jam. Living through green lifestyle will be an effective solution. Green lifestyle is one of method to reducing using harsh effect energy in all of our daily activities such as lowering using cars to transport us from one place to another, yet it can be changed by walking or riding bicycle. Thus method is going to decrease traffic jam rapidly.

On the other hand, some people believe that the high-price of petrol can decrease the pollution problem effectively, but, exactly it is not the wise solution for society at all. Another solution to revealing our environment from global damage is expansion re-planting program started from our home to the broad neighborhood such as our city and country. Besides, take care of our precious treasure, forest, is the main responsibility. Therefore, there are many wise and effective solutions to make the rate of emission fell.

In conclusion, to take care of our environment from global damage is actually started from ourselves back to nature, lowering using harsh effect energy through our own lifestyle.  

WRITING LESSON #part5

CAMBRIDGE 8/ TEST 1/TASK 2

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

We live in the midst of several kinds of person called society that have many norms to keep them up in the harmonic relationships. Others society is also the main source which has a role to build everyone’s character. My view is, however, most of people think that school is the best place to learn how to be a good person, but personally the best place and people to learn it is parents.

Being a good person between the societies is a must, but building a beauty personality cannot be made in the short of time. Building everyone’s character should be started from their childhood, because the term of gold brain, the best time for brain to learn everything, is when people still child. At that time, parent being an important person who has a power to bring up their children, it seems they become the primary teacher for person’s life. To make it succeeds, parents have to make family is the first and best school for kids, because learning the simple family regulations such as brushing teeth before bed time, is the first step to fulfill the society’s norms.

The counter argument is that school is the best place to learn how to be a good member of society. There is no doubt that, now days, school provides many kinds of high education facilities, besides in this place student can get the virtual society systems such as learning team work through their own friends. Obviously, most of people believe that school is the best place to prepare their children to face their future with a good personality. Unsurprisingly, being a today’s trend that many parents put a fully reliance to build their kids personality in school.

 In conclusion, even school provides many kind of education facilities that can fulfill children education needs. Yet, family especially parent is the first neighborhood that human faced in their whole live, and it will take a fully responsible for their future.

WRITING LESSON #part4

CAMBRIDGE 7/TASK 2

Some people who have been in prison become good citizen later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dangers of committing a crime for teenagers have became the priority concern between parents today. Some of them think that avoid this condition by learning directly with people who have been in prison is good way. Personally, I extremely disagree that it will be the best method to protect the youngster from a crime.

The main cause of committing a crime is the worst of moral education among the society. Therefore, unsurprisingly there are many criminality cases that surrounding people particularly for teenagers. To protect children from it, they should enclose with positive environment, have some good friendships, work in the good community, have valuable activities, and live among the great brotherhood. From this condition they will be apart from the dangers of violation automatically.

On the other hand, learning through someone’s experiences is sometime the effective way to understand things. For instance, related with this case, some people believe that learning from ex-prisoner’s experience will be worth for their children protection. Yet, commonly most of people cannot believe easily with people who have bad background such as ex-prisoners. Moreover, family education is the best way to keep them safe from crime influence, harmonic relation between the members of family is the main foundation to make family education much more worth.

In conclusion, learning the experiences from people who have been living in the prison is not bad method to protect children from dangers of crime. However, the best way is increasing moral education started from family relation itself. 

WRITING LESSON #part3

CAMBRIDGE 8/ TEST 4/ TASK 2

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In fact, many data show the society of developed countries currently living through their worst behaviors. It is completely going to influence their level of health and fitness. This essay I will explain why and how to solve this case.

People today, especially who are living in the big country, have many duties for their occupation. Unsurprisingly, they have spent their weekdays in the work place, either for working until midnight or for working in a whole day. Consequently, they do not have much time to make a notice for their body needs such as doing an exercise or eating health food. Bad news, modern people have not used their leisure time as good as they can. Most of persons today are spending their free time just lying down on their sofa for watching TV or reading book surrounding with many cookies. This habit is the main cause of obesity, the popular health risk for the developed country people.

As we know, almost the main cause of health risk among the big country society is bad time management. All of them are just over focused for their careers and forgetting for their health condition. To solve this problem, making the strict health daily activities schedule is a must for them. Not only concern for their occupation but also give space time for their body needs, for example doing exercise just few minutes every day. Besides, they should control and pay more attention for their food. Organic food such as vegetables and fruits are the best choice for daily meals, and avoiding some kind of fast food.

In conclusion, living in this modern era is vulnerable to decrease our level of health. However, we should manage our time and food especially for our body’s needs as good as we can. 

WRITING LESSON #part2

CAMBRIDGE 8/ TEST 2/ TASK 2

Now days the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?

Has this become a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that the development of technology has affected the way many people interactions. Most of today’s high-tech has provided many advance features which are bringing the people’s life easily. This condition will give some benefits for the society relationship and in this essay I will explain why.

As we know, citizen used to spend much more time to do every single thing, for example the ancient people used pigeon to send their letters and it would spend more than a day to do it. Yet, in this modern era, people can touch with their family in many simple and fast ways, even they living far away from their home. All of it, because of advance technology expansion, it can make the world being the tiny place seemed the entire country in this world closer. This fact is one of the power of high-techs that has affected and has changed people’s lifestyle being fast.

Moreover, technology has provided many kind of simplicities. However these simplicities can make persons more individualism, because they believe that with today’s technology anything seems possible. They can do some activities in the short time, for example when I was a child my mom spent much time to wash my family’s clothes, but today she just put it on in a washing machine, and it will be done no more than an hour, it is very simple. Women used to do just household activities, but currently they can do other activities such as working in an office because of technology.

In conclusion, development of technology has given massive effects, either negative or positive effects particularly in interaction way among society. However, the majority of these effects are simple and fast lifestyle. 

Note: This writing same as the previous writing, I just want to write the advantage side.

WRITING LESSON #part1

Cambridge 8/ Test 2/ Task 2

Now days, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

That has become a positive or negative development?

It is true that technology has changed a lot the social relations among society in this world. My view is that this fact of high tech development has become a negative development for society not only for the relationships but also for their psychological effect and this essay I will explain why.

First of all, now days, most of people living in the modern lifestyle who do not want to be a left behind person in every single side of their life such as their clothes mode, news, food, car, and the popular one is gadget related with advance technology development. Because of that reason, many high-tech factories have been release their simple advance product containing some complexity parts due to make easier for the consumer. This fact will influence citizens very much to fulfill their own desire about technology, because they believe that technology will bring them to the easiest lifestyle and make them to be an up-to-date person among their own society.

Secondly, as we know from the first paragraph, most of people believe that with today’s technology almost anything seems possible. Because of that, people are much more individualism rather than people in the past. They are living with their technology and their own selves. It seems they do not need everyone’s help ever. It is not like used to be people always help each other in the previous decade. For the simple example, parents today are less talkative person for their children even they sit side by side, and it becomes the common scenes among us, because they just focused to their gadget.

In conclusion, I understand that technology development has positive effect especially to prove the science. However, it will give a huge worst effect for the society regarding on its advance features that will influence the society relationships.