WRITING LESSON #part4

CAMBRIDGE 7/TASK 2

Some people who have been in prison become good citizen later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dangers of committing a crime for teenagers have became the priority concern between parents today. Some of them think that avoid this condition by learning directly with people who have been in prison is good way. Personally, I extremely disagree that it will be the best method to protect the youngster from a crime.

The main cause of committing a crime is the worst of moral education among the society. Therefore, unsurprisingly there are many criminality cases that surrounding people particularly for teenagers. To protect children from it, they should enclose with positive environment, have some good friendships, work in the good community, have valuable activities, and live among the great brotherhood. From this condition they will be apart from the dangers of violation automatically.

On the other hand, learning through someone’s experiences is sometime the effective way to understand things. For instance, related with this case, some people believe that learning from ex-prisoner’s experience will be worth for their children protection. Yet, commonly most of people cannot believe easily with people who have bad background such as ex-prisoners. Moreover, family education is the best way to keep them safe from crime influence, harmonic relation between the members of family is the main foundation to make family education much more worth.


In conclusion, learning the experiences from people who have been living in the prison is not bad method to protect children from dangers of crime. However, the best way is increasing moral education started from family relation itself. 

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